I am writing a Original fiction and need a grammar nazi to help me with punctuation and the like? While I love writing I hate using little things like comma's they hate me.

Can anyone help?

Just wanting to let everyone know that Sue is fine though I believe she is going through internet withdrawal as we speak. She and her family were hit by the massive power outage but are otherwise just fine.

Title: Watching
Author: Evan James
Beta: SueMonroe
Pairing:</b> ?
Word count: 1525 (without lyrics)
Rating: PG
Warnings: AU, Non-Canon compliant. Song Fic
Summary: He watches from afar wondering when they will see what he has known for so long now
Author’s Note: quite a while ago my wonderful, magnificent, superb, amazing, astonishing, brilliant (yeah I know laying it on a bit thick but hey *shrugs*) beta challenged me to write a song fic to DESPERADO BY THE EAGLES. This is my very late answer to that challenge hopefully it meets her expectations.
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended. Avada Kedavra…that is for saying that Severus is dead.

( Watching )

Cliché Challenge:
Reading as much HPfanfic as I do I have seen tons of clichés and now here are the tops:

Harry/ Draco the dreaded Veela fic this one is almost mandatory for all writers in the fandom

Harry/ Bill after Bill’s attack He finds himself attracted to Harry rather than his bride-to-be Fleur.

Harry/Severus forced in to a marriage they didn’t want could they make it work.

Harry/ Ron they have been friends forever what if one of them wants more?

Harry/ Charlie Charlie has always been good with wild creatures can he tame the Boy Who Lived?

Harry/ Kingsley well there aren’t enough of these to have a Cliché we should change that.

Harry/ Lucius Lucius changes side unexpectedly goes after Harry for fun

Harry/? Harry gets pregnant even though it hasn’t happened in how ever many years, but as you know ‘if it is impossible improbable or just plain not likely it will happen to harry usually at the same time.’

Come up with your own but I want to see your takes on the old Clichés, the oldies are still goodies

Tags: challenges
Current Location: Office
Current Mood: creative
Current Music: Garth Brooks In Pieces

Well, after 2 months I am finally back and have the worse case of writers block I have ever known. 4 hours slaving away in front of my lap top and I get 402 words that it no more and that with 6 WIPs and 8 waiting in the wings.

My Mom in law is doing great she had her last round of Chemo and has been given a clean bill of health for now. We still have to wait the five years but it looks really good, she goes for reconstruction soon then she'll be "evened out again" as she says.

I am still trying to work on Cronos prequel and sequels but their not going very will at all as I said I got 402 words written. but I am trying.

I have gotten myself a insane journal account also incase anyone wants to read that
http://evanjames.insanejournal.com

well that's your friendly update from me

Tags: rl
Current Location: bath trying to drown
Current Mood: crushed
Current Music: my immortal

Here is the Video I made to go with suemonroe's Fic The black Legacy which can be found on the snitch and FF.net. its a WIP but worth the read.

Ok, I know that it's been a long time since I talked about Cronos but I thought you all would like to know what is up with Evan and Severus.

well for starters I have started Cronos:Awakens. it will be a prequel to Cronos and tells about the time from the end of Sixth year until the beginning of Cronos in 2002. I wanted to get the back story out so that everyone would understand why Harry/Evan was acting the way he was.

I have also began to correct all of the errors in Cronos and been doing some rewrites to make the story better easier understood and get rid of those nasty little inconsistencies that i found when i read it over again. Like Bella dying by Evan's hand then many chapters later takes part in the black/Malfoy wedding. what a FUBAR that was.

Cronos:Titan Returns is finally out of plotting stage and into writing but with the problems in Cronos I might have to wait a little before i can really get going on that one.

and the finally installment of the Cronos Saga. Cronos: Anew. this will be the final piece and will tie the Life of Evan and Harry together.

Tags: cronos
Current Location: my desk
Current Mood: creative

I am trying to put together a video for a song that sue got me stuck on. But to do it I need as many x-dressing pics of the men of Hpverse as i can get. if you would either post them here or email them to me that would be great.

Loves and Hugs
Evan

Pay It Forward: I will send a handmade gift to the first 3 people who leave a comment here on my blog. I don’t know what that gift will be yet, but you will receive it within 365 days. The only thing you have to do in return is "pay it forward" by making a similar agreement on your blog.

Borrowed from:suemonroe


Just FYI: I make simple beaded Jewerly and cases ie small boxes lighter cases. things like that. so i would need you favorite colors if you respond.

Lady B got me thinking about Drarry which is odd in itself that it wouldn't leave me alone was down right terrifying. Since my beta wouldn't touch Drarry if her life depended on it I made this video instead, no editing need. you can thank me later sue. lol

Tags: youtube
Current Mood: tired
Current Music: creed